The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the onomatopoeia that you incorporated to describe the clocks. I have to admit that the ending was sad even though it fit nicely with the clockmaker's lesson for the children.
02/08/11
I love your title, your message and how this just flows. Beautiful, exquisite work.
02/09/11
Wow! I absolutely loved this wonderful story and children teaching in rhyme. Lovely!
Inspired writing. This is simply amazing. That it flowed so easily is surly a testament of the talent of its author.
02/10/11
Still lovely! Congrats on your EC!!!
Hooray! So glad to see this beautiful work recognized. Congratulations. Loren
02/10/11
Incredible story-telling. Not only was there a wonderful story in this poem but your rhythm and rhyme were brilliant.
All that in 750 words? How is that possible?
Beautiful story within a story within a poem. Your phrasings were fun, the lesson superb. Congratulations on your EC!
02/15/11
Beautiful and well done story and poem. I really liked the atmosphere you created. A well deserved award.