The Official Writing Challenge
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02/03/11
Very poetic and descriptive. Beautiful.
02/03/11
Wow you took me on quite a journey. At first, I thought she was remembering a love who died, then I said no, he cheated on her. Then my heart broke at what her precious Daddy did. Forgiveness is wonderful and so light feeling. Great job on this tough topic.
02/07/11
Ahh fooled me. You have some lovely imagery and lots of emotion here.
02/09/11
Very strong imagery in this story.
02/09/11
I agree with the range of emotions that you invite us to explore with your MC, whose growth through the grief is increasingly clear. Well done.
02/10/11
Congratulations for placing 11th in level three and 27th overall!