The Official Writing Challenge
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02/03/11
Very poetic and descriptive. Beautiful.
Wow you took me on quite a journey. At first, I thought she was remembering a love who died, then I said no, he cheated on her. Then my heart broke at what her precious Daddy did. Forgiveness is wonderful and so light feeling. Great job on this tough topic.
Ahh fooled me. You have some lovely imagery and lots of emotion here.
02/09/11
Very strong imagery in this story.
02/09/11
I agree with the range of emotions that you invite us to explore with your MC, whose growth through the grief is increasingly clear. Well done.
Congratulations for placing 11th in level three and 27th overall!