The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/11
Good story with an interesting twist - keep up the good work!
02/05/11
Very well-crafted story which builds the suspense in a credible way, though your word limit pushed the issue of potential death a little earlier than a longer piece would have enabled you to do.
I enjoyed the humour and the challenge of your closing twist. Excellent work.
02/05/11
Oh wow. I'm glad it didn't turn out to be real. :) Good job on writing this story!
02/06/11
This sure was a unique story! Is that experiment real? I've never heard of it. Great twist at the end. I can imagine the groans in the room.
02/07/11
Really, really interesting - loved the twist! I think it's a valuable lesson in not taking the easy way out.
02/09/11
What an interesting project you described. I wondered if this had really occurred in a university.I could see I was getting close to the end of the story and wondered how in the world you could describe this harrowing 24-hour period--good twist! Excellent characterization here.
02/09/11
This certainly was 'suspense-filled' - I wondered wherever it was heading and just what they had let themselves in for. A brilliant twist - a clever teaching - great writing. Well done.
02/09/11
Clever writing, clever professor. Thought provoking, too. It had me wondering how I would've responded and able to answer why in two thousands words.
02/09/11
Very very clever. Sneaky too!
02/09/11
What a story. I couldn't imagine them going through with it. Loved the angle at the end. What a great professor. Those students were a lot wiser and keener by Mondy. Well cone.
02/11/11
I remember that experiment. The results were brutal. I'm surprised how deeply I fell into the teacher's trap. I, along with the students, was ready to enter the experiment.

Great ending. Great message.
02/12/11
Shann, this is absolutely great in so many ways. Clever, definitely! Unique, an unquestionable, yes! AND I love the humor in the fantastic lesson!! As for me, I was outta there before that door closed! :)