The Official Writing Challenge
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I've never watched the TV series but this seems to play out authentically. I enjoyed the Biblical tie-in. Nice writing! (Wish we could see Jack Bauer's surprise at the resurrection.)
02/08/11
Wonderfully done! The format is perfect and your word choices made this seem detached and logical, just like I would think Jack Bauer would have done it.
Oh...how cleverly you matched this timeless story to 24. Excellent writing.
02/09/11
I always enjoy your brilliant creativity. Love this secret agent/CIA take on the arrest of Jesus. Two thumbs up!
02/09/11
Awesome take on the topic. I've never seen 24, but I know the premise. What an excellent way to go with this. Love it!
Loved it! I think Fox should be contacting you anytime now to sign you up as one of their serial writers!
02/09/11
I found this an interesting read which was put together very intelligently. Thanks!
I've never seen 24, but your story was a fun read. You did a great job with the limited word count.
02/10/11
Brilliant parallel narrative that only occasionally lets the original story slip through, Gregory, you are very gifted writer. Yet I'm surprised about the lack of satellite connections. Didn't you know they had radio back then? Well, all their ruins were wireless! But seriously, I really love your work.