The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm impressed by your creative technique. You described many wonderful days in the most beautiful way. I got Goosebumps each time I read the words Know He is God.
02/08/11
Great thoughts!
I realize that this is mostly free verse, yet you use a similar form in each stanza. Perhaps you could make each coordinating line match in rhythm.
The repeated lines at the end of each stanza are very effective!
02/09/11
Good use of this week's topic. I really liked the free flow of your verses and how you tied them all together with the last two lines of each stanza. Great message. Great hope. Great writing.
02/10/11
Congratulations! Beautiful!
02/10/11
Very well-crafted and creative style. Well-deserved placing.