The Official Writing Challenge
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A delightful read with a good message. Very enjoyable.
02/08/11
This is quite touching, with humor interspersed and then your ending caught me by surprise. What a great message this contains.
02/10/11
I really liked the characters. The not so happily-ever-after ending also took me by surprise.
I think your ending was truer to real life tho.

The message to live each day like it is your last is a needed reminder.
Congratulations for placing 13th in Masters and 19th overall!