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02/03/11
Very creative and inventive. Five stars in my book. Loved the ending.
What a unique story! I have not heard the term "kook" used in many years!
02/04/11
I'm so glad Sanzabar didn't win this battle!
02/04/11
Very creative take on the topic... "Satan as a roaring lion seeking whom he may devour." I liked the interplay of the two viewpoints. Well done.
02/04/11
Excellent! What a great POV and voice. Love it!
This is a greatstory. I liked how you sprinkled humor to break up the tension. The ending was great too!
02/08/11
Quite imaginative and creative, very well written. I like how you thought completely out of the box on this one.
Creative--well written--suspenseful--even humorous-- Excellent story.
02/09/11
Yup, the devil goes about like a roaring (or silent in this case) lion, seeking whom he may devour.
Great characterisation, and a great perspective on the poisonous nature and the limited power of evil.