The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a very interesting day in a doc's life
02/05/11
Interesting piece and makes a good point. As an ex - nurse I followed it through to the end, but I could imagine that without any medical experience it may not read as easily. However, good dialogue and fits the topic well. Well done.
This was a very interesting take on the topic. The fast pace of the entries echoed the urgency of the doctor's heart. At first, I was a tad confused about who was talking, but once I figured it out I knew something huge was going on, I liked the different way in which you told the story. It worked well.
02/07/11
Quite the time-management casserole here. As a non-medic I found it hard to follow who was speaking at which point. Maybe I need to be more (of a) patient...
02/08/11
Great take on the topic. Interesting and fast-paced. My son's father-in-law is a doctor and you're right...they make terrible patients. They take care of everyone else but themselves. Great angle.
Congratulations for placing 15th in level 3!