The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a fun twist on the old story. Good thing Grandma didn't stipulate marriage! I really enjoyed every klutzy minute and giggled often while I read.
A delightful fun read. The ending caught me by surprise. Well done.
02/04/11
What a cute twist! Fun story.
02/05/11
I agree. The twist at the end took me by surprise. Well done.
02/05/11
I like this light hearted story. Could be a slot drawn from a comedy film. Thanks for the enjoyment - just needed a bag of popcorn!!
02/05/11
Very cute story:) Nice job. You made me smile big.
02/06/11
Dogged persistence pays off, especially when grandma's will gives her such a "ruff" deal! A good fun read, with a great twist at the end.
02/08/11
As I read, I thought it would be a trite, predictable romance with a highly unrealistic premise: love within 24 hours. Your ending relieved my concerns. Nice little surprise twist! Well done!
This is so cute. I'm smiling ear to ear. I think the Hallmark Movie Channel could use material like this. Well done and congratulations on your placement. Loren
02/11/11
Very nice! Made me smile throughout. Loved Charity. The ending was totally unexpected. Congratulations on your placing!