The Official Writing Challenge
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Very powerful thoughts here. Not sure what I would do-will have to think about it!
02/04/11
Wow! What a thing to think about. I don't know what I would choose. Very thought-provoking.
02/04/11
A very searching question, indeed! I'm afraid many of us would spend the day wondering (in the back of our minds, at least) whether we should have chosen a different sort of day. Good job.
02/04/11
Lyrically lovely. Well done.
02/05/11
Wonderful - really enjoyed this. thanks
02/05/11
Such wondrous thoughts to be pondered as I made my way through the beautiful imagery of the seasons. A very enjoyable poem.
With your lyrical words, you lead your reader into pondering. I'll take one of each, please.
I can't chose, so I'll take all with a promise that a long, sustained memory is included.
Your poem brought back many fond remembrance of days gone by. I wish to reclaim them all.
The only day we have is this day,to rejoice and be glad in it. I'm glad I got it.
02/08/11
Very kool poem. I liked it. I thought it flowed well and provided many beatiful images tha captured each season and gave me something to think about. It blessed me. God bless.
Beautiful, I especially liked theday with the geese honking