The Official Writing Challenge
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01/31/11
Very descriptive, though I'm wondering if it might help to ease the pace with a couple of stanza breaks. (My humble opinion - as a non-poet.)
Exquisitely dazzling! I felt every emotion behind every word.
Wow - this is beautiful -- really beautiful.
02/01/11
Honest and raw. I like it. Well done.
Beautiful and and very touching. It's nice to feel the hope in your words.
Congratulations for placing 7th in level 3!