The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/11
Love it! Being now closer to eternity than I am to the day I was born, I can relate. Well-done.
01/28/11
I thought the structure of the poem was excellent and the rhyming lines. The thrid verse tripped me up - the last two lines didn't seem to lead on from the first two.

I liked the message...and the comment about baggy trousers.
02/03/11
Smile... love it!
I can relate more and more each year.