The Official Writing Challenge
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That's strange because your title and story is compelling!
Great work!
My heart was thumping throughout the whole read. I was pretty sure it was an accident and seemed strange that they wouldn't look there but it added more suspense. I liked how the husband blamed the wife. It seems so real. I think_ you could have ended it with the rabid skunk. Great story.
Had my attention all the way through. I know the challenge is limited by word count, but I would love to read more of this story.
This was mesmerizing! I too, would love to read more. However, I do pray this is not something you actually lived through, but instead, a great work of fiction!
Riveting stuff, and I agree with AnneMarie in hoping that it is not part of your personal story.
Wow, what an intense piece of writing. The title makes you want to read it, then once you begin you are caught in the drama. I really enjoyed it.
Oh wow! So sad. What a chilling entry.
Your writing engages the reader into the mystery unfolding on the page. So glad that the MC was able to experience a sense of closure at the end. Good job.