The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved this! The descriptions, the conversational tone, the humor. But this line I have to say I was disappointed to read: "I don’t even want to discuss the matter of waste disposal" because, hey! that's the thing I wonder the most about! LOL!
01/29/11
Wonderful! Very clever to write from Noah's point of view. A "get down and get dirty" piece of writing that is refreshing.
01/31/11
What a fun and creative way to tell this story! I love Noah's voice. Great job!
02/03/11
What a great voice for Noah. Congrats on your EC!
02/03/11
Congratulations on your EC.
Lynda, so clever and witty and funny and well written and everything else I wish I could do with fiction. Outstanding and very enjoyable. Congrats on EC too.
02/03/11
What a great title for your story. Your humor was wonderful. My favorite line is, "I didn’t kiss the ground. The ground didn’t save us, God did..." Your ending is powerful. Congrats on your Editor's Choice award!