The Official Writing Challenge
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Simply beautiful. You packed a lot into this little gem, a whole hundred years worth. Nicely done.
01/30/11
From a century to a sanctuary. There's gentle warmth about your writing. well done.
01/30/11
A story of solitude in singular surrender, softly spoken.
This was charmingly delightful with a heart-warming ending.
02/01/11
I loved this line: Mama laughed her deep, throaty laugh that always made Henry feel warm like he was bread fresh from the oven.
Good writing throughout this gentle piece. Expecting to see this in the winners circle.
I felt sad for Henry. He lived a great life but how sad to only do what people expect, and not what God made you to do There's a great life lesson in this story. Beautiful writing, you managed to evoke all kinds of emotions from me.
Congratulations Congratulations for placing 6th in level 3!