The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/11
I pray I never experience the last of a child. Your MC's despair was palpable. You brought Goosebumps upon my arm when the MC suddenly realized he had been driving in his state of turmoil.
01/25/11
Gave me chills. Excellent.
01/27/11
Congratulations on your EC win.
01/27/11
Wow! An amazing story, intense, profound, and very real. You capture so well the state of mind in which the physical world no longer matters. Exceptional writing--Congratulations!!
01/27/11
Congratulations Steve on an outstanding article.
01/29/11
You did an excellent job of capturing the despair of a human soul. It was tangible. I felt it and saw it. Incredibly well done. Congratulations on your well deserved win.
02/01/11
Wow. Every once in a while I get discouraged with everything related to writing, and then I read something like this. Gosh. Well done! A piece this good breathes life back into my fingers. Thank you.