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It's amazing how bitterness can grow in our heart and spread throughout our entire body. You did a great job showing just that. Though the ending was a tad predictable, I think I'd have been disappointed if she had ended up with anyone else.
01/25/11
Lots of feeling in this piece. Good ending. Nicely done. Thank you.