The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an intense topic and you handled it well. The ending felt a bit abrupt, and I would love to see this expanded. Definitely a subject that needs to be dealt with.
tis was written very well. I thought at the end that he obviously had been forgiven by the Lord, and it's too bad he waited so many years to seek forgiveness from his wife--when she had already given it.
You've tackled such a controversial subject. Your writing breathes emotion… with heartbreak and forgiveness. I love Louise's response and how she demonstrates 1 Cor 13.
Brave writing and well told story of God's forgiveness. I thought an actual angel was there, and maybe it was an angel and she had already passed, or maybe it was his wife; still she delievered an excellent message. It was nice to find out his true feelings for her. I enjoyed your story.
So brave to deal with such a hot topic. You did a good job. It sounds like the wife was immersed in the Word most of her life and was able to forgive like she could. What a lesson of forgiveness!
Awww. This is really sweet. Kudos to you for tackling such a big issue in such a refreshing and nonthreatening way! I like this.
Isn't the Lord wonderful the way he forgives and gives people second chances. Praise his wonderful name!
Your article inspired me to say the above.
A difficult subject, handled with sensitivity and heartfelt emotion. Well done.
My heart ached as I discovered the tormented secret.

I too was thrown off when you mentioned the cute angel. the description "cute" didn't fit the tone of the rest of the story.

I hope (hoped) your MC would find peaceful forgiveness.
I'm sure you will receive mixed reviews on this last I for one thoroughly enjoyed. The characters were so real. This is a hard topic to tackle I'm glad Jesus gave us the courage to write it.
This was lovely and well written. Thank you for writing it.
Oh brave one. Good to see your writings. Difficult topic. Drew me right in. I have to admit the word "cute" threw me. Very good job.
Congratulations for placing in the top 30 overall!