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01/20/11
This beautiful poem celebrates the seasons, but even more the hope of the Christian. Well done.
01/20/11
Lovely thoughts to hold in one's heart. Very nice.
01/23/11
I can't imagine writing a poem. Very nice job:) It flows perfectly and has a message of hope!
01/23/11
What a beautiful phrase, "soul's bouquet." I really like your association of "seasons" with "rhythm of His hand" -- I'd never thought of it that way, but it's perfect (especially for a Master Designer). I agree with the other comments, you meter is about as perfect as it can be! This is simply beautifulů in workmanship and message!
01/23/11
Lovely phrasings for an equally lovely message. Well done.
01/25/11
Wow! What a wonderful message carried by beautiful imaginary and moved along with perfect flow. Easy and enjoyable read. My personal favorite. Thanks for this.
01/25/11
Your poem shows just how wonderful God is!
01/25/11
Lovely poem!

I felt a little jolted out of the smooth rhythm in the spring to summer to winter part without fall...but loved your beautiful comparisons!
01/28/11
Loved every stanza, but one struck me as particularly profound:
"Each season with its purpose
Presents a lesson new,
A guide for life within the Vine,
The seasons we pass through"

Yes, the vine, constant in all seasons, if we can but remain there. Well done!