The Official Writing Challenge
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The poem was so heavy in the beginning, but as I read the words made my heart The last verse is beautiful. Well done!
01/23/11
I like this free verse. Some really good descriptive work. Good writing!
01/23/11
I believe I've walked this road. Nice job in describing the hard times and then the hope that comes at the end.
01/23/11
Nice flow, very descriptive and a very encouraging word.
Thanks for sharing.
01/23/11
Of the entries I've read, I've not read many on "seasons of life"… I can relate your poem to several Bible stories, "the woman caught in adultery" is one. I really like how you ended this… with the image of cleansing rain… and hope!
I love how your whole poem leads to leaving the burden and receiving the cleansing rain.
Congratulations on your EC win.
01/27/11
A very moving, heartfelt poem, with a nice glimpse of hope at the end. Well done--Congratulations!