The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/11
God always provides, doesn't he? Even when it's just a key to a feeling of security.
01/25/11
As I read along I felt like I was there with the MC. The home desstruction seeemed to be symbolic of the destruction of the family, which was clever, and I loved how you didn't tell about the physical devastation, yet it was ever so clearly shown.
This left tears in my eyes. As I'm rapidly approaching my empty-nest syndrome, I can so relate to the MC. The ending was perfect, not rushed or contrived. This is one of my favorite stories this week. Well done!
Congratulations on placing 7th in level 3 and in the top 30 overall.