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01/18/11
Like Chrissy, I'm not sure how it connects with the topic, but its truth is clear.
01/18/11
an interesting and well crafted poem about the heart but i agree with the others that it does not seem to fit clearly with the theme of the Blue Moon
01/18/11
I liked this very much. I see the theme tie in here: Though you/we are forgiven often, by His mercy, you dare not test Him by intentionally choosing an unspeakable sin, assuming you'll be granted that 'rare' and most merciful redemption.
We are so blessed that Jesus gave his life for our sins. As long as we give him our heart, we need not fear. The more people who learn of Christ's mercy the more rejoicing there will be in heaven on everyday and not just in a a blue moon. How blessed we are!
Congratulations for placing 6th in level 3 and 30th overall!