The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/11
awww so much in this, it could have been the summary of a whole novel condensed into the word count. You did well here going from the
carefree "child" who had her mum running around after her to the young lady in love and then the tragedy of the cancer and the love cut short through death.
It reads like the plot for a novel by Nicholas Sparks and i love his stories.... maybe there IS a longer story hiding here.
good one
What an intense romance. I loved your characters and the way they loved one another. Congratulations for placing 13th in level 3!