The Official Writing Challenge
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01/13/11
Ok, now you know, I'm not going to be able to look at our 2 outdoor cats the same again! Great job of personification. I enjoyed this!
Delightful to read, excellent work!
I was hooked immediately and you kept the momentum going all the way through! Nice personification. I confess to being s-l-o-w in getting that last paragraph - I read it 3 times before the light came on (but that's just me, I'm sure). Made me recall fond memories of barn cats, and the small comforts we provided for them sometimes. :-)
01/20/11
You made me want to adopt these kitties. Great work on filling this with emotion. Your writing descriptions are beautiful... [I loved that the lady was peeking out the door, watching the kitties drink from the bowl.]
Oh this broke my heart. What a wonderful message. With the economy many pets are being left behind.Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level and the top 30 overall!