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01/13/11
Sweet, sweet story! I enjoyed this one!
01/17/11
So sweet! What a wonderful surprise she had. Was beginning to wonder how he did it with it being '61, but you fixed it right up. Delightful
01/17/11
Very, very nice job. You deserve big time kudos for this one!
Whew! Was so glad it was a good ending. You had me worried a minute. Good writing skills to tamper with my emotions like that. Enjoyed your story.
01/17/11
I just love a happy, surprise ending. This one made me smile. Beautifully done!
This gave me chillbumps and a big lump in my throat. (You must have done a good job with your story!)
01/19/11
Loved this! But it is also true that I am a sucker for a good happy ending with returning military personnel! Now my grandson is joining up.
Congratulations for placing in the top 30 overall!
11/29/11
Lynn, I'm going to feature this on the Front Page Showcase for the week of December 26. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!