The Official Writing Challenge
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Catching my breath & blinking back tears. I kind of figured that's where the story was going but you told it so well that it still got to me! Thank you.
01/15/11
lovely—just the right amount of hope infused at the end.
01/15/11
A lovely, touching story. I'm so glad she got the glimpse she had prayed for.
01/16/11
What a poignant and lovely story! I loved the ending, the glimpse of hope. Vivid, rich with detail, this story is captivating from beginning to end. Well done!
01/17/11
Very, very nice job. You deserve big time kudos for this one!
Very visual and sentimental, sad and true. It was a big story, but you managed to whittle it down to what we needed to know. Great job.
01/18/11
Simultaneously evokes distress and delight. Well done!
01/20/11
This is one of those where I inhale and refuse to exhale because I know the tears are coming. You painted such an emotional story, so realistic. Wonderful. Thank you also for leaving a comment on my story. I appreciate you taking the time.
Congratulations for placing in the top 30 overall!