The Official Writing Challenge
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Catching my breath & blinking back tears. I kind of figured that's where the story was going but you told it so well that it still got to me! Thank you.
01/15/11
lovely—just the right amount of hope infused at the end.
01/15/11
A lovely, touching story. I'm so glad she got the glimpse she had prayed for.
01/16/11
What a poignant and lovely story! I loved the ending, the glimpse of hope. Vivid, rich with detail, this story is captivating from beginning to end. Well done!
Very, very nice job. You deserve big time kudos for this one!
Very visual and sentimental, sad and true. It was a big story, but you managed to whittle it down to what we needed to know. Great job.
01/18/11
Simultaneously evokes distress and delight. Well done!
01/20/11
This is one of those where I inhale and refuse to exhale because I know the tears are coming. You painted such an emotional story, so realistic. Wonderful. Thank you also for leaving a comment on my story. I appreciate you taking the time.
Congratulations for placing in the top 30 overall!