The Official Writing Challenge
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01/13/11
Good developement of character thru his thoughts. Loved the surprise at seeing the blue moon and Mr. Fancy Pants. I enjoyed reading this.
01/13/11
Ooooooh, somebodies in BIG trouble!! Can't wait to see the next chapter in this fun ongoing western saga of Cornerstone Ranch.

Vivid descriptions and wily characters make this a good read. Keep 'em coming!
01/15/11
Shades of a Biblical parable I know and love. Great voice.
Very, very nice job. You deserve big time kudos for this one!
01/20/11
Wow... great visuals, with the setting. I think you've done an amazing job of weaving this tale. It was an extremely enjoyable read!
Congratulations for placing in the top 30 overall!