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You really bring this story to life, laying bare the emotions of the mother mourning her baby. This is wonderful story telling.
01/13/11
So tenderly and beautifully written. An amazing, inspiring story that you've told very well. Thank you so much for sharing!
01/14/11
This was beautifully written. I could feel the mother's anguish as she was separated from her infant and assuming her to be dead. When I got to the end and found that the newborn had survived, my first thought was, "Now, that is unrealistic!" But then I saw your note that this, indeed, had happened. I am just in awe that a newborn could survive that long w/o milk or adequate shelter. Praise God!
01/15/11
Well-done.
01/15/11
Oh my. Am teary now.
Very, very nice job. You deserve big time kudos for this one!
WHy do you want to mess with my emotions so? Great job. I love happy endings.
01/20/11
wonderful story. a once in a blue moon miracle for sure
Congratulations for placing in the top 30 overall!