The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/11
a favorite of mine this week...simple, sweet & such a realistic depiction of the grandson-grandfather interaction I could see it playing out in front of me.
01/14/11
Several stars for several reasons! Super technique for revealing a character's history- cute characters too! I felt like I was sitting at the foot of grandpas recliner.
01/15/11
You captured the emotions of the grandpa and the actions of the grandson, while revealing just the right amount of detail. Well done.
01/17/11
A sales force of six-year-olds could conquer the world through their persistence.
I love how you havee captured the excitement, innocence and awareness of the child, and linked them with the patience affection of the grandfather. So much life in this interaction.
Excellent work.