The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/11
lovely story... i enjoyed this and felt i was there myself
The story kept building momentum until the great ending. I'm learning so much this week. Great story. I believe in miracles too and love reading about them. I would love to see those fireflies. Wonder what kind of poem I would write? Loved it.
01/15/11
Great story—I felt as if I were there. You probably already caught this minor detail: "Now I thing if we stay together" Didn't detract from the story.
Very, very nice job. You deserve big time kudos for this one!