The Official Writing Challenge
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01/13/11
Loads of different emotions fill this story.
I like the way the scriptures are brought through and the writer held my attention until the end.
Good read.
I am glad it worked out well.
01/15/11
I felt like I was sitting on the beach with this woman as she shared her memories. Nicely written. Well done!
01/15/11
Nice writing. I had my toes reaching for the waves,too. Good job.
01/16/11
Very descriptive and evocative work.
01/17/11
so very interesting phrases and ideas here. I got a little lost in the chronology of events and the present tense also threw me a little. was she on the operating table ? was she on the beach? was she dreaming?
maybe all of them at the same time.
01/20/11
As a former nurse with a chronic health problem, I could really relate to your MC. Congratulations on your EC.
01/20/11
Lillian, Lillian, how did I miss this. Great job and congratulations!!! Very well done.
01/21/11
Congratulations Lillian!
01/25/11
I could relate to so much of what you wrote but that's the beauty of your article. I believe a lot of people would see themselves in your words. Congratulations!