The Official Writing Challenge
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A very well crafted story,not too much description to distract from your story, but just enough. You held my attention from beginning to end. This read very poetic and also reminded me of THE star. Great job. Two thumbs up from me.
Lovely, lovely prose from a poet's heart.
01/15/11
Lovely. As others have said, you put me right there in that barley field gazing at the stars. Thanks for sharing this.
01/15/11
An absolutely lovely story from beginning to end--pure poetry in prose form. I love the emotion here, calm yet deep. Very well done.
01/16/11
Great descriptive writing. I really enjoyed this.
A touching tribute to a kind of shared generational manhood that probably has become rare in this day and age.
Very, very nice job. You deserve big time kudos for this one!