The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/11
Funny! I smiled the whole time I read it. And laughed at the end.
01/15/11
funny :-) WE LEFT HIM IN THE BLUE CHEESE MOON I like the way this is like typical of the Thunderbirds or Batman type serials where the Hero is left in a seemingly impossible situation. I found this quite good reading. I wonder did you need to keep saying who the person speaking was as it was qite clear it was a dialogue?
so will we get the next episode in next weeks challenge or will we be left UP In THE AIR ... boom boom
01/15/11
This amusing story is very creative. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.
01/19/11
What a hoot...laughed outloud over that last line. Oh, but you must have had fun writing this story. I can just see you chortling away.
This was a delight to read. I loved your adventure and enjoyed the ride.