The Official Writing Challenge
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Your story is poetic and your descriptions are lovely to read. I like how you brought in the character
's story.
Beautifully written tale. (Please, let it be fiction.) I love the combination of your seeing all that you describe, while being pulled emotionally, as well. Nicely done. (BTW, snow in the Skagit Valley brings the same reaction. :)
Beautiful prose here for description of nature and emotion.
A huge emotional story in such a small amount of words. I love the line "does truth lie in darkness" - so much to think about there. The story pulls at me in kind of a haunting way. Great entry.
Very descriptive with a mild smooth voice. Your opening and ending tied in well and some of the imagery was outstanding; poetic. Great job.
Very involving in every sense of the word. Amazing imagery and emotional cues - deep and abiding loss and hope all tied together. I could join in the moment - the sights, smells, regrets, suffering, hope, and the tender/loyal/committed relationship between man and dog that offered sweet companionship in the midst of it all. Wonderfully done!
Very, very nice job. You deserve big time kudos for this one!
Beautiful imagery. I could feel the chill in the air and the sadness of the MC. Wonderful writing.
Outstanding descriptive, emotional piece. I can only stand in awe.
Congratulations for placing in the top 30 overall!