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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 – Advanced)
Topic: Once in a Blue Moon (01/06/11)

TITLE: His Heavy Hand of Opportunity
By Tracy Nunes
01/07/11


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Once in a Blue Moon…you feel the press of His Hands; the weight and power of them crumble your proud strength and your backside falls into a horizontal position. It is there that you find out what “Be still and know that I am God” really means (Psalm 46:10a).

Throughout our lives as Christians He’ll often move pebbles - repeatedly -to get our attention. A little stone here and a little one there, until we gradually start to get a vision for the mountain He is building.

Or, He will speak in a gentle whisper just strong enough to float a feather. If we’re paying attention we’ll feel the slight brush of the plume as it glides over our cheek and follow it wherever it leads.

But, once in a Blue Moon, He will allow the full force of His presence to bear down on our circumstances and we can’t help but be knocked off our feet. Choice is removed from the equation; He will have His way.

He will have His way and we can only choose how bad our struggle is going to get; the internal – and eternal – struggle, that is. He has ordained our state of affairs and there is no budging. Like a wild animal who has been caught for relocation to a safer place, but who perceives that it's been fixed in a trap engineered for its doom, we can beat against the cage and rage.

These last couple of years of my life have been a wild ride of highs and lows; higher highs than ever and lower lows by far. It culminated in the neurosurgery department at Kaiser Hospital where a disk in my neck was removed to make way for a Bioplastic doughnut and bone pulp with the hopes that it would eventually resolve long term pain.

They cut open my throat and moved aside everything that was in the way: esophagus, arteries, and ligaments in efforts to fix my ravaged spine. Surgery went well but weeks of post-op recovery forced me to sit still for prolonged periods of time. And, that was where I had a choice; to rage against it and feel sorry for myself (which I did do at times) or turn and embrace that Hand, heavy though it was.

And when I chose to grasp the Hand instead of slap it, I learned to be still and let Him do His handiwork. I learned that He can do things best when I stop trying to help Him. I found out that, as much as I thought I had learned in my walk with my Savior these 25 years, I'd yet come to complete surrender. It was a surrender that only could have happened when His heavy hand made me sit.

He made me sit and be completely unproductive, unhelpful, and unworthy so that I could find out that His love for me is not measured by how much I do for Him or for anyone else. It isn’t measured by what treasures I gather to lay at His feet. It’s measured by His willingness to step down out of heaven and into this world for my sake.

While He is present everyday and in all ways, He will occasionally give us a unique opportunity to see a glimpse of Heaven, a unique opportunity to hear His voice without distraction. Sometimes this gift will come wrapped up in pain and suffering and it will be tied with the bow of discouragement. But, it is a gift worth opening…once in a Blue Moon.


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Noel Mitaxa 01/14/11
I like the line about grasping the hand instead of slapping it. Thanks for inviting us into your journey.
diana kay01/15/11
i like this and it is a "powerful story" of major surgery that we would all hope to never need to have. i like the idea of God moving pebbles and stones to get our attention and that occasional more dramatic event that stops us short...
I love the descriptive and original way you describe the surgery.. I hope you are well on recoveries road now
Brenda Rice 01/15/11
Thanks for sharing your story with us. You used come very creative language to describe your pain and your surgery.
Lillian Rhoades 01/17/11
Graphic, informative with many spiritual principles to consider. I do have some question about the validity of your conclusion. I know you wanted to tie it to the topic, but you may have overreached. Unless I misread, whatever "gifts" God sends our way are worth opening all the time, not just once in a blue moon.
Lollie Hofer 01/19/11
I enjoyed your take on the topic and how God used your surgery to help you find what unconditional love and acceptance is all about.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 01/19/11
Jesus knows us best, sometimes a pebble works just fine, but sometimes we need a brick. In the end it just shows how much we are loved.
Henry Clemmons01/20/11
Wow. I'm glad you placed because I would not have read this. Congrats on EC.
diana kay01/21/11
congratulations :-)
Kim Hamlin01/21/11
great job Tracy, congratulations!