The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/05
Terrific story. It read really well, one of my favorites.
01/17/05
One of my favorites too, but the ending is a bit curt. It feels like the story has more but has been cut short.
01/17/05
Beautiful story. I loved every word.
01/18/05
If we look at the right things we will always get the right things out of life.
Great writing! Very touching, so much to learn about everyday...
Thanks for sharing,
Keep winning and shining for Jesus.
I greatly enjoyed your story about Eva. How wonderful you spent so much time, outside of your job, with her. My only suggestion is that your paragraph about the activities with her could be broken up which would make it easier to read. Other than that, it was a great story!
I loved your trip to the zoo with Eva. :-) God bless you.
01/22/05
Wonderful, everyday IS filled with wonder if we look. Amen
you made me cry.
01/23/05
isn't it interesting what we learn from the people God places in our lives