The Official Writing Challenge
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Intriguing - enjoyed the captivating characters and effective conveyance of emotions and setting. Great story!
Interesting take on the topic. Great descriptions.
A good story, the setting as new as it is old, with a satisfying ending.
12/30/10
A compelling story and a good take on the subject. The conversation seemed so natural as the sceptism of the boy. Good job.