The Official Writing Challenge
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12/23/10
I really like this. Of course, I've heard the story of the Tower of Babel forever, but I never once stopped to think what that must have been like for the people that actually experienced it. You did this in such a creative, delightful way, too - great work!
12/23/10
Well-known Bible story offered in a fresh way. Creative. Certainly on topic.
12/24/10
This is great - wonderful poetry and I love the intervening explanations.
I appreciated the conjecture that went into how people might have been affected, but I loved the humor in the side comments by the MC.
12/27/10
A very clever balance between narrative verse and explanatory prose as you present the inside story of a cataclismic event that we easily bypass as we read through Genesis.
Now I really liked this. Beyond clever and witty and talented and I loved the personality of the mc. I enjoyed it very much and thought it very creative.
I really enjoyed this fresh prespective. You also have a delightful sense of humor. Congratulations for placing inthe top 20 overall and 9th in Masters.