The Official Writing Challenge
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12/23/10
Jolly good. Fun, on topic and played out in homes everywhere.
Nothing like being on the same page where it matters.
What a cute poem!
12/23/10
Cute - I enjoyed this!
lol - this is priceless. I love it! Thanks for making me giggle.
This was very cute and giggle-worthy.
12/26/10
Sound a bit like me. My hearing is not what it used to be.
Thanks for the smiles today.
As for the last lines:
"And when she got a hearing aid,
Mistakes like these, no more she made."

Well, I guess we'll just have to wait and see : )
12/27/10
A fine couple, brought together by God, with hearts attuned, no communication breakdown can render asunder. An enjoyable read wonderfully written!
12/28/10
Loved this!
12/28/10
Personally I believe you have another winner here!
12/28/10
Delightful.
12/28/10
*giggle* This sounds like my parents. I love it!
Very creative, precious and sweet.
12/29/10
Funny, but so true to life for the hard of hearing. Certainly communication breakdown in the raw!
12/29/10
Aw, what a cute couple! Wonderfully done like a Poet Master :-)
12/29/10
ROFL! So cute and fun. I loved the humor in here and it was hilarious all the way to the end. It was good! nicely done.
Thanks for the smile. Congratulations on placing 11th overall!