The Official Writing Challenge
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12/24/10
Broken communication i.e. broken promises and the devastation left by both.
A beautiful poem with a sad reality. Great writing.
Faded dreams ...
Amidst clouded drooping heads ...
Flowered words ...
Became untruths.
Sworn promises ...
Long forgotten –
That once we spoke but never knew.


Poetic description of failure to communicate. Great job!
The emotion in your poem shows such a deep sadness--nothing much unhappier than faded love and broken promises!
12/29/10
This is very beautifully expressed-thanks for sharing, I enjoyed the read!
12/29/10
Beautiful, but so poignant and sad at the same time. Great, great job!
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