The Official Writing Challenge
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12/20/10
I like your word pictures, and your intro is very strong. A few minor typos have weakened the thrust, but I congratulate you on trying a poetic genre, which I've not yet dared to attempt.
12/21/10
Good word descriptions. Thank you.
12/22/10
Very strong imagery in this poem with a great message.