The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a delightful story--Gospel message, history, romance, humor--it's all here, and I loved it.
This is a gemstone, Mona. I loved the anointed feel of God's presence it gave me. A very honest MC in the story I believe you didn't have to travel far to find. Thank God He understands us and allows us the ability to understand Him. Enjoyed this greatly.
A fun read with a good message about "church language." The ending was pleasing.
12/18/10
Awww, what a sweet story! Loved the setting
12/18/10
Loved that positive ending of a story that was so well sketched as you set it out.
Perfect! I loved the flavor of this. Made me laugh a few times. Good job.
12/21/10
Seems to me that this child had the answers Jesus was looking for, even tho she shocked the church lady. My only "red ink" is that is seems too short - I'd like to hear more of this story!