The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a delightful story--Gospel message, history, romance, humor--it's all here, and I loved it.
This is a gemstone, Mona. I loved the anointed feel of God's presence it gave me. A very honest MC in the story I believe you didn't have to travel far to find. Thank God He understands us and allows us the ability to understand Him. Enjoyed this greatly.
A fun read with a good message about "church language." The ending was pleasing.
Awww, what a sweet story! Loved the setting
Loved that positive ending of a story that was so well sketched as you set it out.
Perfect! I loved the flavor of this. Made me laugh a few times. Good job.
Seems to me that this child had the answers Jesus was looking for, even tho she shocked the church lady. My only "red ink" is that is seems too short - I'd like to hear more of this story!