The Official Writing Challenge
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12/21/10
I like this poem! Very well crafted. Thank you.
12/21/10
Well done! I like the change of tone as she discovered the truth.
12/21/10
I enjoyed this poem, and I LOVED your title!
I enjoyed the rhythm of your poem. Good job.
I liked Lost in Translation for some strange reason, BUT I Loved this poem for all the right reasons. It had a good perky consistant rhythm with a likable voice and a great message. I know poets don't like the word cute, but I mean this sincerely as a compliment; it was/is cute and delivers a very intelligent anointed message. Great job.
You showed well in your poem how the Bible is truly like a foreign language--until you meet the author.
12/22/10
Great title and strong message. I also liked the flow of the poem.