The Official Writing Challenge
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12/19/10
Loved the title's meaning and how you wove it into this well crafted story.
12/21/10
Good, interesting story. Thank you.
YOu transported me to a foreign land where I found myself holding my breath many times. You did an outstanding job.
12/22/10
I too liked the meaning behind the title. I liked your mc's character and compassion. Well done.
12/23/10
Yay! Congratulations, Mick... for your editor's choice award! Your story is filled with emotion and perfect for the topic. Great work!
12/23/10
Well-deserved first placing, Mick! You've set the scene and built through your MC's thinking to a close that opens doors in a way that makes me want to know the next part of this adventure. Great stuff.
12/23/10
Thank you to everyone for your support and the EC.
WOO HOO!! Congratulations Mick, this EC has been a long time in the making. Well done my friend, I'm delighted for you :-)
Great story! I enjoyed the flow and pace, the buildup and climax. You gave us just enough information along the way, and the payoff was excellent.
01/17/11
Way to go, Mick... I'm so happy for you!!! This was a GREAT entry for the topic! As usual, your writing is very creative, and draws the reader into the story. Congratulations on your first place and EC. Welcome to Master level... you certainly deserve it!!! If you see this... e-mail me at my new e-mail address... lisdiajoh1@yahoo.com