The Official Writing Challenge
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How lovely. I really liked that love can be understood by all. You did such a nice job painting a beautiful picture.
12/19/10
Your simple word pictures told a big story. Very well done poetry on the topic.
I love the picture you have painted here. Blessings.
Wonderful. Such a complete story in so few words! Well done.
12/22/10
I liked how the second and third lines of each stanza gave understanding to the first line. I enjoyed this poem...well done.
12/22/10
I enjoy this poem for how you have built up to the truth that needs to be demonstrated as much as it needs to be explained.
12/22/10
I enjoy this poem for how you have built up to the truth that needs to be demonstrated as much as it needs to be explained.
12/22/10
You can't tell me anything about deja vu; for like me; you've probably seen all that stuff before!!! Sorry about that...
12/23/10
Beautifully written - I like the way your headings flow. The theme of love in adversity is also very moving. Well done.