The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this. It had a soothing rhythm to it that comforted me somehow. I enjoyed how you got inside Adam's head. It took talent to make this work like it did. Great job.
12/21/10
I like where the focus is, inside Adam's body. Good story. Thank you.
12/22/10
I liked the line - "Adam awoke without any sense of subtraction." Good one! Thanks for sharing.
12/22/10
Very fresh approach to a very old story. If only Adam had been more adamant....