The Official Writing Challenge
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12/18/10
I felt so comfortable sitting along side your sweet little girl. I could feel her homesickness. This is just so lovely and believable. Love it bunches!
12/18/10
Your sweet story shows so well the homesickness of the little girl and how her bond with the kitten comforts her.well done.
12/18/10
This was a sweet story that gave me quite a bit of insight into what it would be like to come to a totally foreign country.
12/18/10
Taking a look at ourselves from another's perspective is hard enough, but to write this view down takes real skill. And you have warmly shown us this skill. Very well done.
12/19/10
Very skillfully written. I can almost picture the interactions with the animals.
12/22/10
Aw, I loved this story! Especially the Texas setting, well done! I could feel her sadness, yet peace. Great!