The Official Writing Challenge
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12/16/10
I loved the surprise warmth in your ending.
Instead of the old man grumping, it is the young man. Interesting twist
What a sweet story. How little effort it takes to be kind and the old man received so much in return!
12/21/10
Good story for this week's topic. I didn't see the ending coming. Must break that grandpa's heart to see his grandson being so cold-hearted.