The Official Writing Challenge
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What a brilliant way to get your message heard. I really enjoyed this. Often poems can be lost on me but your message rang out loud and clear.
12/15/10
You have sketched the outline and coloured it in with an economy of language that shows your skill beautifully.
12/16/10
Marvelous! I could see a bit of a Christ figure in the old man. People waited for Christ for centuries and when He came, it was not in a manner that they expected. Yet He came for our salvation.

Perfect story for the Christmas season! For being a first attempt at poetry, I'd say you did absolutely awesome!
Congratulations for placing 8th in Masters and 12th overall.
12/17/10
Yahoo! It is cool to see our names side by side on the top 20 list! (Though I'm surprised you're not above me. ;) )