The Official Writing Challenge
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Love this! Just excellent. Your characters and the interactions are flawless.
This story has the same powers as that bottle of coke. It opened happiness in me and I can't stop smiling.

Very, very nice.
Soooo good. You captured atmosphere SO well in this. LOVE it.
Oh this is such a sweet story about love and forgiveness. I really enjoyed it. I expect it will do quite well.
I love the interaction between these two, which is enhanced by the transparency of your word pictures. Great work, Sara.
What a great story for this week's challenge. Loved the interaction of the characters, the drama, the forgiveness. Exceptionally well-written.
Oh, I hope this is a winner! so well written - the little details and the stilted conversation and the powerful emotions. You tugged on my heart with this one.
Loved everything about this emotional story. You brought me right back to my own childhood and precious memories with my grandpa. Awesome.
What a heart-warming tale of forgiveness and love! Loved your grandpa character.

This looks like a winner to me!
Way to go, Sara! So glad this placed high. It was one of my favorites. :)
Highly commended, indeed! This story gave me such a warm feeling. You go, Girl!
Sara, Congratulations on your HC win. Great story.